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EDIT981 – Language, Writing and Editing

2018 – S2 External

General Information

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Unit convenor and teaching staff Unit convenor and teaching staff Unit Convenor
Adam Smith
Contact via adam.smith@mq.edu.au
Margaret Wood
Tutor
Minna Korhonen
Credit points Credit points
4
Prerequisites Prerequisites
Admission to GradCertEditElecPub or MCrWrit or GradDipCrWrit or MAccComm
Corequisites Corequisites
Co-badged status Co-badged status
Unit description Unit description
This unit focuses on language, including variation in grammar, usage and punctuation, and linguistic approaches to writing style, discourse development and readability. It examines the features of different text types, spoken and written, as well as those evolving on the internet. It discusses communicative approaches to writing, including plain English for mediating complex content, and promotional writing for advertising purposes. It includes modules on editing Aboriginal English, and on academic writing and editing, especially theses and journal articles.

Important Academic Dates

Information about important academic dates including deadlines for withdrawing from units are available at https://www.mq.edu.au/study/calendar-of-dates

Learning Outcomes

On successful completion of this unit, you will be able to:

  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

General Assessment Information

How to apply for a late submission of an assignment

All requests for special consideration, including extensions, must be submitted via ASK.mq.edu.au and provide suitable supporting documentation

Late Assignment Submission

  • Late submissions without an extension will receive a penalty of 5% of the total mark available for the assignment per day.
  • Late submission of an assignment without an extension will not be permitted after marks have been released to the rest of the class.
  • Extensions will only be given in special circumstances, and can be requested by completing the Special Consideration request at ask.mq.edu.au and providing the requisite supporting documentation.
  • For more information on Special Consideration, see the university website https://students.mq.edu.au/study/my-study-program/special-consideration
  • Assignments submitted after the deadline, regardless of the reason, will be marked and returned at a date determined by the unit convenor.
  • Extensions cannot continue beyond the start of the following semester, and students should be aware that long extensions may impact graduation dates.

Assessment Tasks

Name Weighting Hurdle Due
Editing for academic journal 10% No 31/8/2018
Online discussion 25% No 16/09/18
Punctuation 25% No 14/10/18
Practical work (2 options) 40% No 18/11/18

Editing for academic journal

Due: 31/8/2018
Weighting: 10%

Language editing for Journal of Audiovisual Translation (each student would be required to edit one paper and check another student’s editing of one other paper). Pass/Fail.


On successful completion you will be able to:
  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Online discussion

Due: 16/09/18
Weighting: 25%

This discussion focuses on nominal style and the extent to which nominalizations are essential to the discipline or type of discourse, or unnecessary to it. Your task is to find:

(i) a short paragraph in which nominalizations are part of the professional language of writers in the discipline (= essential nominalizations)

(ii) a short paragraph in which nominalizations are unnecessary for the communication, or perhaps a deliberate strategy to mask difficult information which will be unwelcome, for whatever reason (= nonessential nominalizations)


On successful completion you will be able to:
  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Punctuation

Due: 14/10/18
Weighting: 25%

Your punctuation assignment is to repunctuate (a) a passage from an Australian short story and (b) a passage from a piece of instructional text, which have had all their punctuation removed.  Your punctuation should make the syntactic structure and meaning of the passages clear, while indicating features such as direct speech, titles, lists, etc. 


On successful completion you will be able to:
  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes

Practical work (2 options)

Due: 18/11/18
Weighting: 40%

OPTION 1: Promotional writing

Choose any two books, one (a) from the general trade area of publishing, the other (b) from the professional/educational area.

For each of them, write copy for

  • the banner for electronic advertising
  • the feature line for a single-page advertisement (or the front side of a leaflet/flyer).  You should also indicate in a couple of sentences what graphics you’d suggest to go with the feature line, to support the intended message and ensure its impact.
  • two or three paragraphs for the back cover of the book

OPTION 2: Scholarly editing

Project yourself into the role of an editorial project manager responsible for producing an anthology of scholarly articles in a particular field (in print or online).

Your task is to create a cohesive collection of fresh papers in a specialized field with which you are familiar.  Such papers often appear first in the “working papers” of a university or academic discipline, and are easily found on the web via a Google search >> working papers education/ geography/ linguistics.  You should select five interesting papers from at least two different sources publishing during the last five years, to make a coherent set with a common topic or theme. 

 


On successful completion you will be able to:
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes

Delivery and Resources

Students will require Internet access with a reliable web browser and e-mail facility, and must be able to play back recorded lectures (audio only).

Unit Schedule

Week 1                 Grammar in the context of editing

Week 2                 Sentence patterns                                                                          

Week 3                 Nominal and verbal style

Week 4                 Cohesion and coherence in writing

Week 5                 Information delivery: topic and topical progression

Week 6                 Punctuation system and  its functions 

Week 7                 Readability and lexical density

Semester Break

Week 8                Writing, speech, and the language of the internet 

Week 9                Editing Indigenous texts

Week 10              Persuasive and promotional writing

Week 11              Editing theses and dissertations

Week 12              Editing scholarly articles  

Policies and Procedures

Macquarie University policies and procedures are accessible from Policy Central (https://staff.mq.edu.au/work/strategy-planning-and-governance/university-policies-and-procedures/policy-central). Students should be aware of the following policies in particular with regard to Learning and Teaching:

Undergraduate students seeking more policy resources can visit the Student Policy Gateway (https://students.mq.edu.au/support/study/student-policy-gateway). It is your one-stop-shop for the key policies you need to know about throughout your undergraduate student journey.

If you would like to see all the policies relevant to Learning and Teaching visit Policy Central (https://staff.mq.edu.au/work/strategy-planning-and-governance/university-policies-and-procedures/policy-central).

Student Code of Conduct

Macquarie University students have a responsibility to be familiar with the Student Code of Conduct: https://students.mq.edu.au/study/getting-started/student-conduct​

Results

Results shown in iLearn, or released directly by your Unit Convenor, are not confirmed as they are subject to final approval by the University. Once approved, final results will be sent to your student email address and will be made available in eStudent. For more information visit ask.mq.edu.au.

Student Support

Macquarie University provides a range of support services for students. For details, visit http://students.mq.edu.au/support/

Learning Skills

Learning Skills (mq.edu.au/learningskills) provides academic writing resources and study strategies to improve your marks and take control of your study.

Student Services and Support

Students with a disability are encouraged to contact the Disability Service who can provide appropriate help with any issues that arise during their studies.

Student Enquiries

For all student enquiries, visit Student Connect at ask.mq.edu.au

IT Help

For help with University computer systems and technology, visit http://www.mq.edu.au/about_us/offices_and_units/information_technology/help/

When using the University's IT, you must adhere to the Acceptable Use of IT Resources Policy. The policy applies to all who connect to the MQ network including students.

Graduate Capabilities

PG - Capable of Professional and Personal Judgment and Initiative

Our postgraduates will demonstrate a high standard of discernment and common sense in their professional and personal judgment. They will have the ability to make informed choices and decisions that reflect both the nature of their professional work and their personal perspectives.

This graduate capability is supported by:

Learning outcomes

  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Assessment tasks

  • Editing for academic journal
  • Online discussion
  • Punctuation
  • Practical work (2 options)

PG - Discipline Knowledge and Skills

Our postgraduates will be able to demonstrate a significantly enhanced depth and breadth of knowledge, scholarly understanding, and specific subject content knowledge in their chosen fields.

This graduate capability is supported by:

Learning outcomes

  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Assessment tasks

  • Editing for academic journal
  • Online discussion
  • Punctuation
  • Practical work (2 options)

PG - Critical, Analytical and Integrative Thinking

Our postgraduates will be capable of utilising and reflecting on prior knowledge and experience, of applying higher level critical thinking skills, and of integrating and synthesising learning and knowledge from a range of sources and environments. A characteristic of this form of thinking is the generation of new, professionally oriented knowledge through personal or group-based critique of practice and theory.

This graduate capability is supported by:

Learning outcomes

  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Assessment tasks

  • Editing for academic journal
  • Online discussion
  • Punctuation
  • Practical work (2 options)

PG - Research and Problem Solving Capability

Our postgraduates will be capable of systematic enquiry; able to use research skills to create new knowledge that can be applied to real world issues, or contribute to a field of study or practice to enhance society. They will be capable of creative questioning, problem finding and problem solving.

This graduate capability is supported by:

Learning outcomes

  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Assessment tasks

  • Online discussion
  • Punctuation
  • Practical work (2 options)

PG - Effective Communication

Our postgraduates will be able to communicate effectively and convey their views to different social, cultural, and professional audiences. They will be able to use a variety of technologically supported media to communicate with empathy using a range of written, spoken or visual formats.

This graduate capability is supported by:

Learning outcomes

  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Assessment tasks

  • Editing for academic journal
  • Online discussion
  • Punctuation
  • Practical work (2 options)

PG - Engaged and Responsible, Active and Ethical Citizens

Our postgraduates will be ethically aware and capable of confident transformative action in relation to their professional responsibilities and the wider community. They will have a sense of connectedness with others and country and have a sense of mutual obligation. They will be able to appreciate the impact of their professional roles for social justice and inclusion related to national and global issues

This graduate capability is supported by:

Learning outcomes

  • Full awareness of the parameters of language with which writers and editors work
  • Familiarity with alternative linguistic styles and forms of communication
  • Ability to assess manuscripts for readability, and to suggest measures for their enhancement
  • Ability to write for particular audiences and purposes
  • Familiarity with the demands and limits of editing academic theses

Assessment tasks

  • Online discussion
  • Punctuation
  • Practical work (2 options)